People tend to skim content rather than reading it word-for-word. That doesn’t mean they don’t appreciate good content–they prefer the content they need when they need it. No more no less. That’s especially true when it comes to reading from a computer screen. Most people skim-read main points and that’s why copywriting for the web needs to be different.
It needs to be clear and concise.
Joseph M. Williams researcher of English language and the author of Style Toward Clarity And Grace advised that whenever possible you should try to compress several words into a word or two, and be on the alert for opportunities to do so.
In the book he provided the following examples of common phrases and expressions that can and should be compressed to achieve a clear and direct style [this would especially apply to web copywriting].
A simple rule of thumb… don’t use the words on the left when the ones on the right will do!
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because, since, why |
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although, even though |
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if |
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when |
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about |
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must, should |
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can |
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may, might, can, could |
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before, after, as |
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more, less/fewer; better, worse |
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In summary, stop worrying yourself over the long vs short copywriting dilemma–make sure your copy is clear, concise and relevant to your reader.